Here are some of my personal suggestions; ¹ Instead of that kind of music, try using lofi / calming music and when you added it to your clip, lower the volume for it. ² If you're going to be consistent with posting your gameplays, don't let it always be uncut because there are times that the viewers might find it boring, I suggest you only keep the ones when you're fighting someone. ³ Try to lessen the mods that you have on screen, so it doesn't get messy, if the mods are not that important then turn it off. ⁴ If you're recording while using OBS Studio, I suggest you record your gameplays with the option "capture any fullscreen application so that the sides wont be blacked out. That's all, nice video!