Surbate
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Surbate
Suggestion:
Fix minor grammar error in Parent Notice
Detailed description:
As seen in the image, the sentence marked as red seems to not have a period in between, causing the sentence to look "packed".
View: https://i.imgur.com/gXPQfpc.png
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It would just improve the professionalism, especially if parents are supposed to read the article, which could lead to a couple more customers.
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