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Abandoned Mansion - Map Review (#1)

aeserior

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Hi!
I am starting a new series in which I rate maps submitted for the Minigames - Maps Competition. Note, this all my personal opinion, DO NOT TAKE IT SERIOUSLY.

Abandoned Mansion Submitted by @MAX-11 (MAX11)

First looks:
The first thing I noticed is that the map name was spelled wrong 😐 ( View: https://imgur.com/fkcaX3H
)
Description is kinda corny, and it's a luxury mansion from the 90s? which is broken? weird.
Thumbnail looks weird and not eye-catching.

A more deeper look:
The creator could have done a much better job at presenting a map as it would bring more upvotes, his video does not include any fancy packs or shaders, WHICH JUSTS LOOKS WEIRD.
Second, THE MAP IS JUST TOO SMALL. Everything in the map is small and not so connected. Everything is just too connected with each other and easy to access and I think it needs a little distancing. ALSO.. Since this map only has 4 teams which is just for quads and trios. the map should be positioned for a long type of game experience (e.g. taking more time to access things.)
Most of the details are in the middle which is still very small. The map doesn't resemble any type of mansions etc or the broken type of things he mentioned.

Overall & Conclusion:
I think the creator could have done a much better job at representing the map and could have made it a little bigger so that it could suit the game it would be used it. I think adding more details could go a long way. The map is just way too small and connected and could add more area in the diamond + emerald gens and spots (and heights).

Disclaimer:
All builders work really hard on their builds and deserve credit. I do not intend any hate to towards the map or the creator. This is my personal opinion towards the map, Please do not take it seriously.

Rating: 6/10

If you want to look into his work/map, Here are the links:
Map Submission: https://discord.com/channels/234731357903781888/1152177815819669615/1162755745478086656
Showcase video:
View: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ajl27GzxyZw&ab_channel=Fantastictoilet


Creator: @MAX-11 (MAX11)
Description: This is a map from the 19s and its a luxury mansion with a big island flooting in the middle. What makes it better is that the level of details it got, its broken at some places and weak at some. play carefully or it will break.
 
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MAX11

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Hi!
I am starting a new series in which I rate maps submitted for the Minigames - Maps Competition. Note, this all my personal opinion, DO NOT TAKE IT SERIOUSLY.

Abandoned Mansion Submitted by @MAX-11 (MAX11)

First looks:
The first thing I noticed is that the map name was spelled wrong 😐 ( View: https://imgur.com/fkcaX3H
)
Description is kinda corny, and it's a luxury mansion from the 90s? which is broken? weird.
Thumbnail looks weird and not eye-catching.

A more deeper look:
The creator could have done a much better job at presenting a map as it would bring more upvotes, his video does not include any fancy packs or shaders, WHICH JUSTS LOOKS WEIRD.
Second, THE MAP IS JUST TOO SMALL. Everything in the map is small and not so connected. Everything is just too connected with each other and easy to access and I think it needs a little distancing. ALSO.. Since this map only has 4 teams which is just for quads and trios. the map should be positioned for a long type of game experience (e.g. taking more time to access things.)
Most of the details are in the middle which is still very small. The map doesn't resemble any type of mansions etc or the broken type of things he mentioned.

Overall & Conclusion:
I think the creator could have done a much better job at representing the map and could have made it a little bigger so that it could suit the game it would be used it. I think adding more details could go a long way. The map is just way too small and connected and could add more area in the diamond + emerald gens and spots (and heights).

Disclaimer:
All builders work really hard on their builds and deserve credit. I do not intend any hate to towards the map or the creator. This is my personal opinion towards the map, Please do not take it seriously.

Rating: 6/10

If you want to look into his work/map, Here are the links:
Map Submission: https://discord.com/channels/234731357903781888/1152177815819669615/1163030448201539585
Showcase video:
View: https://youtu.be/_xhBkLO-s1g

Creator: @MAX-11 (MAX11)
Description: You're in for an epic 4v4v4v4 space showdown with _ol_'s latest map! It's all about fair play and non-stop PvP action. There are Iron, Gold, Diamond, and Emerald generators scattered across the islands for you to snag. Get ready to blast off into an interstellar Bedwars adventure! Don't forget to upvote - it's a stellar map worth the recognition!
Wait the 2nd one isn't mine lol
 
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